What we are going to do going forward to improve our film.

On this post we looking at how we are going to go forward to improve our film opening.

• Sort the volume of the sound.
• Add speech.
• Sort the titles out.
• Maybe add a suffragette voice over in the black and white scenes make the genre more known.

My assement of another group's film opening.

In this blog post I will review the film opening "Outlaw"
The genre is action.
First I commenting on what I believe is good.

• The first comment I made was that the locations were good.
• I also stated that the film opening created a good cliff-hanger which made me want to watch the whole film.

I then stated what made the opening sequence confusing or missing.

• The first idea I wrote was about where the titles where.
• I also stated that the music could be more interesting. This is because they only had one song playing though the film opening and changing it up a bit might make it sound better.

Then I said what could be improved.

• I said that the music was a bit loud. 

Group self assessment on 1st draft

What we believed went well as a group.

•  The footage mostly flowed well.
• All the footage was in the right order.

What we believed should be improved.

• The volume of the sound.
• Check the spelling of all the names in the titles.
• Need more titles as we don't have everyone.
• Script should be added.
• It could be longer.  

Feedback on 1st draft

In this blog post we are writing up the feedback on our first draft of "Because of them".

Firstly we learned about what people thought what was good about are film opening. Here are what some people thought.

• They was a good range of shots.
• A lot of transitions where good.
• Good shots from the bottom of the stairs.
• A lot of people thought the locations where good.
• Another good aspect was the different editing effects.
• They was also good costumes.

Then we learnt about what people found confusing.

• Some people said the scenes jumped .
• One person didn't understand the storyline.
• Someone said it was boring.
• A lot commented on how loud the sound was.
• One person said there was too much enigma.
• Some people mentioned that the titles where in the wrong place.

Then we got told how we could improve our film opening.

• The titles needed to be a different colour.
• The sound needs to be louder
• Maybe some speech to make the storyline clearer.
• The titles need to be re-ordered.
• Maybe a suffergate voiceover to make the genre clearer.
• lighting and colouring could have been adjusted.